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Sцмyyд ддdёёZ

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      Posted: 19 Oct 2011 at 10:12 PM
Ik natamam khwab mukammal na ho saka..
aney ko zindagi mein bohat Inqlab ayy....
Society you crazy breed hope you're not lonely without me :')

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Kyun Raat me dil tanha hojata hai..
Kyun Raat me zakhm gehra hojata hai...
log kehte hain raat sone k lie hoti hai..
Phir kyun roz mera neend se jhagda hojata hai....

Kyun raat me nainan bheeg jaate hain...
Kyun raat me guzre lamhe yaad aate hain...
Log kehte hain raat khwabo k lie hoti hai...
Phir kyun bina poore hue mere khwab toot jaate hain...

Kyun Raat me aks gayab hojata hai..
Kyun Raat me ashq samandar ka aab hojata hai...
Log kehte hain raat chand k lie hoti hai...
Phir kyun mera chand andhero me chhup jaata hai...

Kyun raat me phir wohi sonch aati hai...
Kyun raat me wohi veeraani chha jati hai...
Log kehte hain raat sone k lie hoti hai...
Phir kyun meri ankho se roz neende ud jaati hai.....araaz
Shamil hua tuu aese..
Dil me sabar ho jaise..
Phir besabar mai hoke..
Kese jiyuu.....
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$On!@ AaDeeZ

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~*~ MeRe DiL MeIn Ab BaS YeHi Ik HaSrAt HaI ~*~
~*~ KaBhI TuM KaHo MuJhE Bi TuMsE mOhAbBaT HaI ~*~

-written by soni-
 

Edited by Soni99 - 19 Oct 2011 at 11:42 PM
kUcH B jO aCha laGaY oR mIlaY B zrOrI tO naHi saCh HaI pR HaI aJeeB           
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Sцмyyд ддdёёZ

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^wah wah kia bat hai soni sis greatttttttt keep sharing   
Society you crazy breed hope you're not lonely without me :')

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Siya.Aadeez

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  Awesome Soni!!
Aap kam words mein bahut badi baatein keh jaati ho...Its  a rare feat u hav !!

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 kuch to mere pindaar-e-muhabbat ka bharam rakh ,,
tu bhi to kabhi mujh ko manane ke liye aa ..

Ahmed Faraz
[pindaar - pride]
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                      Dedicate 2 my Teddy Aadee♥♥ 
♥♥ I Wish My Last
Breath In Your Arms♥♥

♥♥I Wish When I Will Die I Want To
See Your Face.♥♥

♥♥I Wish When I Die I Want To Wipe
Your Tear♥♥

♥♥I Wish When I Die I Want To Say Aadee
There Is No one In This heart.♥♥

♥♥I Wish When I Die Last Time I
Want To Hug You.♥♥

♥♥I Wish When I Die I Want To Say Aadee
I Love You So Much.♥♥

♥♥I Wish When I Die I want To Say Aadee
Plz Take care Yourself.♥♥.
♥♥I Wish Even After My Death
I Want To Write Poem For You. ♥♥
Atif you raise us up, to much more than we can be .. Happy Birthday my TEDDY:*
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Rubyat Tanu

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Rubyat Tanu Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 Oct 2011 at 5:32 AM
   
TuMhe Arsa Hua Bhule,
Magar Barish Ke MausaM Mein,
Hawa Jab Gungunati Hai,
Main Apne Ghar Ki Chhat Par Se,
ChaMakte Chand Ko Chhupte
Jo Dhunly Chhaya Mein Dekhun,
Mujhe TuM Yaad Aate Ho...

Jo Baat Nahi Karte,
Un Bolte Rangon Mein,
Maine TuMhe Socha Hai,
Jo Dilse Guzarte Hai,
Un Ajnabi Raston Mein,
Maine TuMhe Dekha Hai...
(AADEE k Liye_)
Atif you raise us up, to much more than we can be .. Happy Birthday my TEDDY:*
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              SOME DAYS


  some days i want to live 

some days i wish it’s over 

some days i long to see 

some days i wait to die;

 

 

some days i think i am fine 

some days i believe i have a problem 

some days i am strong 

some days i am weak;

 

some days i am closer to truth 

some days it seems far away 

some days i think i understand 

 

some days i am just lost

some days i just wish 

everything would disappear 

some days i just hope 

you could be near;

 

 

some days i have a feeling 

one day everything 

will be alright.

some days it feels nothing 

can be change now .......

 

Note: This poem is not written to made anyone emotional or sad. Just enjoy the beautification of the words.

 

Thank You =)

In This Lifetime OR thE NeXt, We will Be TogetHer !!!

Kuch bhi jo accha lage / Aur milay bhi / Zaroori to nahi / Sach hai per / hai Ajeeb”
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                @Naadeem = xtreme xcellent 
Atif you raise us up, to much more than we can be .. Happy Birthday my TEDDY:*
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"Milta nahi jiska nazir, wo ada hai yaar ki
Kar chaley inkar wo, arzu iqrar ki"

- Junaid Aslam -
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Aadee ki Aadeez Huda

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Originally posted by Junaid


"Milta nahi jiska nazir, wo ada hai yaar ki
Kar chaley inkar wo, arzu iqrar ki"

- Junaid Aslam -
   really vnice ClapClapClap
To the world you may be another celebrity but to Aadeez, you are the World. HAPPIESTEST BIRTHDAY TO YOU, AADEE! Muchhhh love.
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   @ junaid bhai
nazir ka kya matlab hota h?
PROUD TO BE AN AADEEZ!

Love u atif forever n always !!

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Gazala Omer Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 Oct 2011 at 10:12 PM
Talash karo ge to koi mil he jayega
Par hum jaisa tumhe kon chahega
Agar koi tumhe pyar se dekhe ga bhi
To wo ankhe hamari kaha se layega


OMER my life ....!
          
          ♥ True fan of Atif Aslam ♥
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   wah wah!  Smile
PROUD TO BE AN AADEEZ!

Love u atif forever n always !!

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   Kabhi utro youn mere dil ke kache angan mein
Kisi udas mosam mein
Kisi weeran lamhe mein
Chupke se dabe paon
Meri ankhon pe rakh do hath apne
Aur hanste hoye keh do
Boojh lo to hum tumhare
Nahen to aap hamare
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Siya.Aadeez Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 Oct 2011 at 10:59 PM
Originally posted by Tanu Khan

   
TuMhe Arsa Hua Bhule,
Magar Barish Ke MausaM Mein,
Hawa Jab Gungunati Hai,
Main Apne Ghar Ki Chhat Par Se,
ChaMakte Chand Ko Chhupte
Jo Dhunly Chhaya Mein Dekhun,
Mujhe TuM Yaad Aate Ho...

Jo Baat Nahi Karte,
Un Bolte Rangon Mein,
Maine TuMhe Socha Hai,
Jo Dilse Guzarte Hai,
Un Ajnabi Raston Mein,
Maine TuMhe Dekha Hai...
(AADEE k Liye_)
 


Mind Blowing Tanu!!! I can almost imagine and feel the Monsoon as I read your lines.Superb  description

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Siya.Aadeez Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 Oct 2011 at 11:02 PM
Originally posted by Nadeem Majeed 2011

              SOME DAYS


  some days i want to live 

some days i wish it’s over 

some days i long to see 

some days i wait to die;

 

 

some days i think i am fine 

some days i believe i have a problem 

some days i am strong 

some days i am weak;

 

some days i am closer to truth 

some days it seems far away 

some days i think i understand 

 

some days i am just lost

some days i just wish 

everything would disappear 

some days i just hope 

you could be near;

 

 

some days i have a feeling 

one day everything 

will be alright.

some days it feels nothing 

can be change now .......

 

Note: This poem is not written to made anyone emotional or sad. Just enjoy the beautification of the words.

 

Thank You =)

 


The best of all opposite feelings that I have ever read...and y do u think it will make some  one sad?? Poems are the best way 2 make someone smile.Waiting for more.....Clap

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Originally posted by Sцмyyд ддdёёZ

^wah wah kia bat hai soni sis greatttttttt keep sharing   
 

thanku so much siso han jab bi koi mind mein ayi share krogi Smile
kUcH B jO aCha laGaY oR mIlaY B zrOrI tO naHi saCh HaI pR HaI aJeeB           
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Originally posted by siya

  Awesome Soni!!
Aap kam words mein bahut badi baatein keh jaati ho...Its  a rare feat u hav !!
 


thanku so much :)


aap thk samjhi meri khud ki koshish yehi hoti hai kam words mein sab kehdo jo bi dil nd mind mein hai 
kUcH B jO aCha laGaY oR mIlaY B zrOrI tO naHi saCh HaI pR HaI aJeeB           
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Nadeem Majeed Aadeez Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 Oct 2011 at 3:26 AM
   Thank You Tanu and Siya ! 

 InshALLAh will put tonight one more !!! =))
In This Lifetime OR thE NeXt, We will Be TogetHer !!!

Kuch bhi jo accha lage / Aur milay bhi / Zaroori to nahi / Sach hai per / hai Ajeeb”
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$On!@ AaDeeZ

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~~*~~ TuJhE MaIn DiN RaAt KuCh IsS TaRaH Se YaAd KrTi HuN ~~*~~
 
~~*~~  TeRi YaAd MeIn MaIn KhUd Ko  Hi BhUlA DeTi HuN ~~*~~
 
~~*~~  KoI mUjHsE MeRa NaAm PoChE ToH MaIn TeRa BaTa DeTi HuN ~~*~~

-written by soni-
 


Edited by Soni99 - 21 Oct 2011 at 4:06 AM
kUcH B jO aCha laGaY oR mIlaY B zrOrI tO naHi saCh HaI pR HaI aJeeB           
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Wah Soni kya shayre ke aap nay.. :p
Mujh ko bata mera dar hai kahan maula...~!
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Post Options Post Options   Quote ayanhorani Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 Oct 2011 at 9:14 AM
  ye words main ne khud banaye hai pata nai friendz achy hai ya nai


  dil ko dil se chura lu ga tum ko apna bana lu ga ek bar tu haan kehdy teri khushi k liye main khud ko mira du ga  Smile


Edited by ayanhorani - 21 Oct 2011 at 9:18 AM
Aaj dil dukha hai, tum yaad aaye
Gham jaan lubh hai, aapne kahaan dhoond paaye
Jaage hain, soye nahi
Aisi hai meri yeh bechaini
Din bhi wohi, raatein wohi
Saanson mein saansein hain nahi
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$On!@ AaDeeZ

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Post Options Post Options   Quote $On!@ AaDeeZ Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 Oct 2011 at 9:17 AM
     ^ thora bara kra chota nazar aying 


wowwww  bohat achi hai keep it up Smile
 

Edited by Soni99 - 21 Oct 2011 at 9:17 AM
kUcH B jO aCha laGaY oR mIlaY B zrOrI tO naHi saCh HaI pR HaI aJeeB           
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