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      Posted: 08 Sep 2011 at 9:53 PM
 
ساقیا ایک نظر جام سے پہلے پہلے -- ہم کو جانا ہے کہیں شام سے پہلے پہلے

کتنا اچھا تھا کہ ہم بھی جیا کرتے تھے فراز -- غیر معروف سے ،گمنام سے ، پہلے پہلے
 

Edited by Sцмyyд ддdёёZ - 08 Sep 2011 at 9:53 PM
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Post Options Post Options   Quote $On!@ AaDeeZ Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 Sep 2011 at 9:58 PM
Originally posted by Jia Jalpari

   waah ek se ek poet hai yahan em useless gud 4 nuthin well koi baat nahi noureen n baaki poet k saath reh kar kuch na kuch sikh jaungi em keen learner
 


jiya yahan sabki apni poetrys nahi hai google se copy kr k send kari hoi hai aap bi kr sakhti ho 
kUcH B jO aCha laGaY oR mIlaY B zrOrI tO naHi saCh HaI pR HaI aJeeB           
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Post Options Post Options   Quote noureen Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 12:32 AM
Originally posted by Soni99

Originally posted by Jia Jalpari

   waah ek se ek poet hai yahan em useless gud 4 nuthin well koi baat nahi noureen n baaki poet k saath reh kar kuch na kuch sikh jaungi em keen learner
 


jiya yahan sabki apni poetrys nahi hai google se copy kr k send kari hoi hai aap bi kr sakhti ho 
  

she is rite jiya sab hi copy paste kar rah hai tou tum bhi karoo na

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@aadeez app log ek sath kafi poetry post kar rah ho kindly ek din main do sa zayad poetry mat post karoo agar shair post kar rah ho tou wo bhi sirf 4 hone chahye

is tarah dosra aadeez ko parhna main problem nahi hogi aur kindly poetry parha kar comment bhi kya karoo tak aadeez aur achi achi poetry post kare thx u

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Post Options Post Options   Quote noureen Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 12:39 AM
Originally posted by aimy hashmi

Originally posted by noureen

   

Ik Hunsi Jo hunsa da, eik Anasoo Jo rula da,

Aik Arzoo Jo Jaga Da, Aik Chahat Jo Samajh La,

Her Aahat Jo Jaan La, Usi Rishtay Ka Naam ha DOOSTI

 
wow norueen u r always the bestBig smile
  

thx u dear

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 hum muskrane walo ko khush naseeb na sumjo
khuch log muskrate hen ghum chupane k liyeee  

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Tum Door Sahi Mujse Sapnoo May Tu A Jao,
Bechain Mere Dil Ko Pal Bar Behla Jao,
Koi Lamha Nahi Kat ta Tumha Chahay Bina Jana,
Yadoon se Nikal Kar Tum Mere samnay Aa Jao,
Bectab Si Dharkan Hai Na Neend Hai Aankhon May,
Bekaif Tabiyat KiKoi Wahja bata Jao,
Bus Itni Si Khawahis Hai Nadan Mere Dil Ki,
Phir a Key Chalay Jana Ek Baar Tu Aa jao. 

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Post Options Post Options   Quote sidra aadeez Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 1:08 AM
               wo hum se itne dur kyn hain
                                aye dil
       k hamara nam bhi unhain hmari yaad nhi dilataCry
The most beautiful person we have known is you..who has known defeat, known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and has found his way out of the depths. Happy birthday Aadee :)
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LUTTA DIA HUM NE SAB APNA HASIL-E-ZINDAGI..
BADSHAH SAY FAQEER HUE FAQT IK WAFA KI TALASH MAI...
CO. UNIVERSITY MAI ADMISSION NA LENNA...
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Post Options Post Options   Quote $On!@ AaDeeZ Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 3:33 AM
Originally posted by noureen

Originally posted by Soni99

Originally posted by Jia Jalpari

   waah ek se ek poet hai yahan em useless gud 4 nuthin well koi baat nahi noureen n baaki poet k saath reh kar kuch na kuch sikh jaungi em keen learner
 


jiya yahan sabki apni poetrys nahi hai google se copy kr k send kari hoi hai aap bi kr sakhti ho 
  

she is rite jiya sab hi copy paste kar rah hai tou tum bhi karoo na

 

but meri copy paste nahi meri khud ki likhi ho hai
kUcH B jO aCha laGaY oR mIlaY B zrOrI tO naHi saCh HaI pR HaI aJeeB           
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   Nothing is won
with out Love
As no one sing
just like dove

Love is the one
which joins the hearts
It repairs the wounds
which piches like darts

Love brings happiness
Love makes us to cry
Love makes us bold
Love makes us shy

Love is everything
it includes loss and gain
It gives us happiness
It causes the pain

Nothing can match with Love
It has every emotion
It is only love
which knows its designation
 

Edited by Jawad Memon - 09 Sep 2011 at 7:02 AM
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Post Options Post Options   Quote * jal-pari* Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 8:06 AM
Originally posted by noureen

@aadeez app log ek sath kafi poetry post kar rah ho kindly ek din main do sa zayad poetry mat post karoo agar shair post kar rah ho tou wo bhi sirf 4 hone chahye

is tarah dosra aadeez ko parhna main problem nahi hogi aur kindly poetry parha kar comment bhi kya karoo tak aadeez aur achi achi poetry post kare thx u

 



Bilkul sahi kaha Noureen ... 

and AADEEZ, lets do one thing... why not to make a proper Poetry department .. 

Jis maii kuch poetry ka shoq aur samajh rakhney waaalay ho, ek team.. jo iss topic ko ache se handle karey.. kuch exiting competitions/weekly contests kuch b laaye iss topic mai.. 


kia kehte hain aaap sab ?? .. 
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Rubyat Tanu Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 8:11 AM
      great idea pari sisy.....

as urdu is nt my language so its so tough fo me to write poem in urdu ya Eng.

it wud  grt if i can write poem in my language :((((( but then no one will understand :'( :"(
Atif you raise us up, to much more than we can be .. Happy Birthday my TEDDY:*
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   soniiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ki poetry bsht =D

soni khud bnaatay hai poetry 
       
Atif Aslam: Aa bhi ja sanam ... Ap exam mey

meri ankhon k halkoon k barey mey tou nahi

likhtin kahin? (smile)

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Sцмyyд ддdÑ‘Ñ‘Z Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 3:18 PM
  Ek Bar Suno Khch Aesa Hua

Wo Mujh Ko Mili
Mai Usko Mila

Izhar Hua
Iqrar hua

Wo Chahney Lgi
Mai Chahney Lga

Phr KHch Yun Hua

Wo Chorr Gae
Mai Toot Gya

Phr Khch Yun Miley

Wo Tanha Thi
Mai Akela Tha

Bas Hum Do They
Or Koi Na Tha

Wo Roney Lgi
Mai Bebas Rha

Na Pyar Na Hi Izhar Raha
Bas Farq Sirf Itna Sa Raha

Wo Mitti K Oper Roti Rhi
Mai Mitti K Ander Sota Raha

Ek Bar Suno Khch Aesa Hua
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Toka Jo Unhone Ke''Kaho, Dekh Li Duniyaa''
Maine Bhi Kahaa Hans Ke K ..''Haan !! Dekh Rahaa Hoon''
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   Dayare noor mai meri shabon ka sathi ho

         Koi to ho jo meri vahshato ka saathi ho

 

Mai us se jhoot bhi bolun to mujhse sach bole

         Mere mijaz k sab mausamo ka saathi ho

 

Mai uske haath na aaun wo mera ho k rahe

          Mai gir padun to meri pastiyun ka saathi ho

 

Wo mere naam ki nisbat se moatabbbar thare

          Gali gali meri ruswaiyu...

Keep Smiling Atif...Stay blessed!!
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Rakho kabhi jazbaat ki, tum bhi koi mehfil ...
Hum sey karna izhar kuch, itna nahi mushkil ...
Mehmaan hoon gey hum, teri ankhein bulaein jo ...
Mehfil bhi hum sajaein geey, tohfa miley ga dil ...

- Junaid Aslam -


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Post Options Post Options   Quote aimy hashmi Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 8:40 PM
Originally posted by Junaid



Rakho kabhi jazbaat ki, tum bhi koi mehfil ...
Hum sey karna izhar kuch, itna nahi mushkil ...
Mehmaan hoon gey hum, teri ankhein bulaein jo ...
Mehfil bhi hum sajaein geey, tohfa miley ga dil ...

- Junaid Aslam -


 


wow its beautiful...after very long tym Junaid i hv read ur poetry...Smile
Keep Smiling Atif...Stay blessed!!
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Post Options Post Options   Quote aimy hashmi Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Sep 2011 at 8:45 PM

Mausam mohabat ka bas itna fasana hai

            Kagaz ki haweli hai aur barish ka zamana hai

 

kya sharte mohabat hai kya sharte zamana hai

            Awaaz bhi zakhmi hai aur geet bhi gana hai

 

Us par utarne ki ummeed bahut kam

           Kashti bhi purani hai tufano ko bhi aana hai

 

Samjhe ya na samjhe wo andaaz mohabat k

           Ik shakhs ko ankhon se ik sher sunana hai

  

Bholi si ada phir koi

               Eshq ki zad par hai

Fir aag ka dariya h

                  Aur dub k jana h….

 

 

 

Edited by aimy hashmi - 09 Sep 2011 at 8:46 PM
Keep Smiling Atif...Stay blessed!!
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Main religious poetry kam likhta hun, ye ek shayr likha tha kaafi pehley ...

Garchey namaz mairaj hai, ummat-e-Mohammad ki ...
Ek mojza darkar hai, is mairaj ko bhi ...

- Junaid Aslam -  


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   wow ^
       
Atif Aslam: Aa bhi ja sanam ... Ap exam mey

meri ankhon k halkoon k barey mey tou nahi

likhtin kahin? (smile)

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Originally posted by * jal-pari*

Originally posted by noureen

@aadeez app log ek sath kafi poetry post kar rah ho kindly ek din main do sa zayad poetry mat post karoo agar shair post kar rah ho tou wo bhi sirf 4 hone chahye

is tarah dosra aadeez ko parhna main problem nahi hogi aur kindly poetry parha kar comment bhi kya karoo tak aadeez aur achi achi poetry post kare thx u

 



Bilkul sahi kaha Noureen ... 

and AADEEZ, lets do one thing... why not to make a proper Poetry department .. 

Jis maii kuch poetry ka shoq aur samajh rakhney waaalay ho, ek team.. jo iss topic ko ache se handle karey.. kuch exiting competitions/weekly contests kuch b laaye iss topic mai.. 


kia kehte hain aaap sab ?? .. 
  

thx u

n not a bad idea

i love to be a part of that team

pari if u remember last time v did poet of the day or month (wat ever) n same as i did the show one word in a topic n then aadeez send there poetry related to that word

sure v start that thing or something other wat u say ?
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Post Options Post Options   Quote noureen Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 Sep 2011 at 1:34 AM

   @junaid hats off to u both shair r awsum

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Post Options Post Options   Quote noureen Quote  Post Reply Reply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 Sep 2011 at 1:39 AM

khusi meri cheen lee usne,
muskurane bhula diya..
gam de diya mujhe,
zindgi bhar rulane ke liye........

kaise jeete wo bichad ke log
ye humne jana hai..
kaise zinda hai wo log ye hamne jana hai..
hamne to apne katil ko dekha tak nhi........

koi kisi se juda ho khuda na kare,
kisi ka pyar bewafa wo khuda na kare,
zuda ho jaye is jism se jaan
yaar ko khuda kabhi zuda na kare

 
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